User blog:Dorsted/Scrapped Ideas

Some scrapped ideas of the author about the plot of Mushoku Tensei

Web Novel 4
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Prototype Web Novel 4

In the author mind, this is how was planned the web novel 4 with 12-14 chapters After that, the Web novel 5 was planned to be the school events (like Web novel 7)
 * Getting caught in the great forest, being rescued.
 * Meet Paul, make up with him.
 * Finding Aisha
 * Finding Lillia.
 * Rudeus Send a letter to Roxy, Roxy is gone and there is a commotion.
 * He comes back home, a lot of things happen.

Web novel 5
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Alternative Versions about the plot The author had some ideas of how develop the plot of this volume, like:


 * Paul leaves Millis after the fight.
 * Buena village isn't caught up in the transition incident and Paul travels with his family + Sylphi to find Rudeus.
 * The family stays in the Buena village and only Paul comes to Millis and confronts Ruijerd.

Web novel 6
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Originally he planned 4 events for this volume But in the end, he merge the events of Dragon King Kingdom with the Shirone Kingdom events, and to compensate that, he published the  Dragon king Kingdom Novel, a novel that he made around 2009. Because that story is a "prototype", some events and plot may dont match with Mushoku Tensei world. Lilia Fate
 * Dragon King Kigdom
 * Shirone Kingdom
 * Before entering Asura
 * In Asura Kingdom

He planned various cases for Lilia fate Aisha Fate Miscellaneous scapped ideas
 * His original plan was to kill Lilla with the Teleport incident, but from a narrative standpoint, the author find that the death of a family member need to be more impactful.
 * Lilia was with Paul at the events of web novel 5, but the idea was scrapped because it affected the reconciliation event between Paul and Rudeus.
 * Lilia was caught by bandits and was a slave in a Coal Mine in Dragon king Kingdom and with the help of hitogami, Rudeus finds her. The idea was scrapped because the author feels that not many readers may like that idea.
 * Aisha managed to survive as a pickpocket in the King's Dragon Kingdom. She was rescued by the Rudeus and delivered by Paul's subordinates to Millis, where she was reunited with her father. She grew up with Norn there, and after a lot of things happened, they were reunited in the school chapters, were she found out that Rudeus was his brother
 * After Rudeus is liberated by Zanoba, Rudeus develop his friendship with, Pax talking about NTR.
 * Fighting the King Dragon in the coal mines of the Dragon King Kigdom.

Web novel 5
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Web novel 5
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Web novel 5
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Web novel 5
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Web novel 5
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Web novel 5
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